The Curse of The Long Sword
The sombre mood in the woodland Hoia-Baciu Forest, was brought on by the chilly
night. He has been called ‘sick…hysterical and neurotic’. Maud Khan was born in 1899 in
the family home at Old Town Bucharest. He has a child named Maria. Unfortunately, after
the tragedy, the one and only thing left for him was the news of his daughter's death. Help
me, Daddie! He last heard Maria's voice after that. He then came to the realisation that he
continued to store flashbacks in his memories. A noise was heard from his left side."Well,
look who's here. What are you trying to find? You'd better get out of here before you wind
yourself stuck like I did”, the racoon warned. “I am searching for food. I have no place to go.
Please help me” Maud’s begging. The sky is turning really gloomy. Maud Khan starts
shaking as he feels something is holding his foot. “I can’t help you with food but I do know
someone that can help you. Go meet Alison. She has something to give,”said the racoon.
Suddenly, the raccoon disappeared from his sight.
Maud Khan has a lot of internal dialogue with himself. “Who is Alison? Something to
give?. I need to find her,” said Maud to himself. Then he carried on his quest to find Alison
the woman. He had no idea that a black crow was secretly watching him. He stepped on some
pebbles and finally reached the night old market where people sell food, pottery, jewellery
and many more. Then, not too far away, he spotted a little cabin. Maud is quite worried
because he senses that something is pulling him toward the hut and he enters it. ‘Are you
looking for Alison, I presume? You're at the correct place, then. Have a seat,’ the fortune
teller said. “How do you know? And who are you, you wicked witch?,” said Maud anxiously.
Suddenly, the black crow flew to Alison's left shoulder and said ‘the sword, the sword. Maud
felt uneasy and wanted to leave that place. Alison then said, “I have good news for you. After
you leave this place, you will get a job. A position that will fulfil your revenge. I know about
your daughter. I will help you,” with mystery, she said. “How do you know about my
daughter? Tell me. Who killed her? I need to kill him!” Maud yelled with rage. She then
gives the sword. He was told about a legend of supernaturally-cursed. As soon as anyone
uses the sword, he or she has exactly 100 days left to live. He felt like a few of the doomed
look like ordinary people in everyday life, but when photographed, they appear headless. He
did not feel safe taking it. Maud gets hold of the sword, refusing to believe the superstition.
Unfortunately, he had no choice. He wanted revenge for his daughter’s death. He then leaves
the place with the sword.
Looking for a mercenary spy with a payoff of 1,000 Romanian leu, according to the
bunch of groups who are discussing to take part of it, all he has to do is kidnap the King’s
daughter, Princess Anya and the money will become his. But how about his plan to kill the
murderer? How about his revenge? He then went to the nearest town to get full shield before
getting ready to join the quest. In his mid journey, suddenly he was sneaked and attacked by
the bandits. He had been knocked out and grabbed by the bandits meanwhile some of the
bandits loaded it. One of the bandits took out the sword then the sword swiftly glowing and
shining brightly that made them lose their sights. The sword suddenly drew near and grasped
Maud's hand. Maud experienced a tremendous power flowing through him. Compared to
earlier, he felt different. He starts to swing the long sword and clashes with them. He killed
the bandits violently as he was fully possessed by the cursed sword. One by one was slashed
by him until he was the one who managed to be the last man standing. After the fights, he
suddenly realised that he had killed people. He had never killed anyone. He was covered with
blood, and shocked and felt very powerful as he managed to defeat 10 people at a time. ‘This
is actually pretty scary. I will never be able to look at another long sword for as long as I
live’, his monologue. He grabs his belongings and continues his journey to the mercenary
town.
The journey continues with his horse from the bandits by getting through the
Hoia-Baciu Forest which is the haunted forest. It is known that the Hoia-Baciu forest has its
own history where whoever passed through the forest will have difficulty to escape. The
density of the trees, which muffles sound and makes it easy to get lost. Even though he knew
about the history of the forest, that does not mean for him to change his path because the
forest is the shortest road to reach Iulia Hasdeu Castle. The forest is filled with living beings
with human characteristics. Those things made it even more difficult to pass through because
they distracted the path and attacked him non-stop. He then gets off from the horse to clear
the path while defending himself using his sword. Suddenly, thick fog descended and
obscured his vision. Because his horse bolted, he was left alone. Bloody heck, Maud asked to
himself, "Where is the horse?". Out of nowhere, a big old tree at the corner approached him
and said “What do you think you are doing, in a place like this?!”. “AHHHHH!” Maud
screamed.”GET BACK HERE”, yelled at the old big tree. He ran until he knew that the old
tree was lost from his sight and he started to walk until he reached the rusty old gate of Iulia
Hasdeu Castle. Without his knowing, he had only 1 day left to survive as he already wasted
days on having so many incidents throughout his journey.
He slowly opened the gate and squeaked until the guardians spotted him sneaking in.
He panicked and smashed the window. He jumped off the steps and ran to escape in front of
the guardians. “Hey, stop right there! You are not allowed to be here!” warned one of the
guardians. He then again stopped and decided to fight back. He took out his sword and
clashed with all the guardians. “All of you, come here fight me at once”, Maud’s provoking
the guardians. “Kill the intruder!” said the guardians. Sounds of alarm and the fight became
more intense as Maud took down every guardian that approached him. “Come out Princess
Anya or I will kill so many more!”, he shouted. Every door of the castle had been rushed by
him but the princess whereabouts until he spotted something different at the royal family
picture. He realised that one of the family members has the same face as his child. He was
shocked and speechless. “Is that Maria? Is Anya, Maria? But, how?” He started to question
himself. Maud quickly searches for Princess Anya in every room. He suddenly found a
secret door behind the royal family photo. He walked through the way and found a room
which King Lucifer and Princess Anya had hidden. “Finally, I found the murderer of my
daughter’s death. And now I come to take your life”, said Maud with anger. “Do not blame
me. I am innocent and the one who killed your daughter is someone else” said the king
panically. “Don’t lie to me! Princess Anya is my daughter, isn't it? Say something?!” Maud
shouted. He pointed the sword at the king’s neck. Princess Anya begging for King Lucifer's
life. “Please, don’t kill my father! I’m begging you, please. Take my life instead.” Princess
Anya burst into tears. “Your father? I’m your father. I have been waiting for you Maria. I
thought you were dead. Come to daddy,” asked Muad. “Is it true, father? Am I adopted? Why
did you do this to me?” asked Princess Anya with tears. “Yes, it is true. You are not my
biological daughter. I don’t have any kids. That is why I ordered my soldiers to kidnap you.
I’m sorry. I did mean to hurt you Anya,” explained King Lucifer with tears. Unfortunately,
Maud lives almost out. He does not have much time. He was speechless and regretted his
doings and taking the opportunity to kidnap the king’s daughter as he found out that she lived
a happy life. He sought forgiveness from his daughter, Maria and in the end, he took his life
and died with the sword beside him.
Few years later, Princess Anya visits a mysterious grave which was located far away
from the castle. She came with her bodyguard and left them while she walked towards the
grave where the sword is stuck on the grave. She places flowers at the grave while smiling,
remembering his late father at last.
Interesting idea that told about fantasy-like cursed sword had such great amount of power and creepy curse upon the holder. Maud is such a good character and I really hope this story had a sequel, maybe continue the story about princess Anya and so on. Overall, I really enjoyed the story.
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